Age: 17 years 2 months 29 days
Everything in the story White Angels is through the eyes of the younger kid but everything happens to the older brother. He is the central character even though he is seeing through the thoughts and eyes of his younger brother. He is a central character because he inspires everything around him. He gets his little brother ( calls him Bobby?) to take acid, convinces him that they will go to Woodstock to live, has sex with his girlfriend and let’s Bobby watch, and helps his parents party come to life. He inspired everything in this story except the admirable girlfriend. But he brings life to everything. That’s why Max is when Carlton pools the glass out of his neck and begins to die. This is an easy climate to pick out that requires no thought whatsoever so that is why I put it as the climax. But let’s see… What then is the real climax? I don’t know, I think that’s it. Because everything sort of builds to that point and after it we have a sort of solution. And that’s the definition of climax right?
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A short story… About anything? Well then, what will I make it about, I have no construction, that doesn’t necessarily mean it will be easier.
I have ideas put into my head. They’re not put there by a machine or program.
In the vast surrounds of outer space I floated in search of some form of life.
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